Star Petals

I folded

the petals

of the brightest star

around me and breathed

passion

until my tears

blew away

on a comet.

 

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4 thoughts on “Star Petals

  1. This is beautiful. It’s not so metaphorical/lyrical/poetic that I’m like, “What is the author even talking about”, but at the same time there’s just enough that this poem is beautiful, evocative, and something to think about.

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